improved versions of my typefaces

well, i tried hard this is where i reached now. thanks to george, smi n ashi and all my friends who gave me suggestions to improve my work. check this out now. anything more i shoul do?

The Brand

hi, The derren brown video seem to be working, im freaking out totally here. i myself know its happening to me, but y cant i avoid it? anyways, im submitting these branding of my new Colgate KickStart here. i seriusly need some comments man. help me out please.

Kickstart typo

hey guys, ive tried out some typos for my toothpaste. the coloured version is just a rough ones. il have to illustrate it properly.

Soughting out few things

Name's been chosen.

Hey fellow's after a long confusion, survey and opinion seeking sessions, ive finally decided to go with Colgate KickStart. thanks for all ur support.

Names of the new variant

Hey guys i need your comments and suggestion on the new name for my Colgate variant. If u have anything in your mind please dont hesitate to suggest and post ur comments also please. Remeber the Target audience is teenagers.

Im posting few names, let me know which i can use. if u have anything in your mind pls suggest.

• Colgate SuperCool
• Colaget Freshy
• Colgate KickStart
• Colgate Combat
• Colgate Yuva
• Colgate Start-Up
• Colgate Superfighter
• Colgate Punchback
• Colgate Dishum
• Colgate 24 x 7
• Colgate Samurai