hi, The derren brown video seem to be working, im freaking out totally here. i myself know its happening to me, but y cant i avoid it? anyways, im submitting these branding of my new Colgate KickStart here. i seriusly need some comments man. help me out please.
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hey the 1st one s good..
i agree with Vinila. But more, more. lets see some close ups of the type too ok? Try using that on a tube as well to see how it pans out on a cylinder
hey george, im not getting enough time out of office, so planning to quit work this month end and concentrate on project. smi actually gave me a good comment, she said, the font looks very soft, it doesn have that kick start factor in it. and im planning to come up with a flavour "mint fresh with poppers" i guess u know those poppers chocolates that as soon as u put it in mouth it starts popping. i thought of this because early in the morning it will let ur senses react suddenly. im not coming up with tube, thought to introduce a cylinder cans, like the 1 u get fr shaving foams and gels. is it oki?
AARGH!!! Vibin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u know u were commentin on my page, rite!!!!!!!!!!! and to think of it, I have sculpture week startin tom!!!!!!!!!!!
U can go on with ur discussion, sorry for the unrelated disturbance! :P
The first one's really good!!!!!!!!!!!
1st one looks bold and goes with the name...try more on the bold types giving a kick!
Hey. I agree with everyone and their mothers. 1st one looks good. Smee said you wanted to talk?
er'...colors bro!...u can still work on it.
n still i say no to all...
ill talk to
yeah aastha. as u told about the product, tube is lil boring to work i agree. i thought of this. i thought y not give toothpaste in cylinder cans like the once of deodrants and shaving foams or y not in the once like dettol hand wash product where u can just press the button and get the tooth paste out. i spoke to many about the deo cylinders but they were saying its not practical because there is no control over it while taking out the paste. but then when u loook at the perfume bottles its just one press where only how much is required comes out unlike deodrants. so i need your comments and some tips on how to improve on this or should i think f something else.
and im not happy with the graphics on the logo. im trying more stuffs. lets c. thanks aastha.
i wanted to comment on your work that u had put up. i think like how others have said u shouldve worked more on the pallette. y not give different colours for different godesses. some yellows and reds greens and blues may make it look very vibrant. here another thing was the white orb to the left was too sriking. than the central figure. its just my view. u can do much superbly i guess..
go with the first one...
Hmmm. But deos and perfumes come like that because they would evaporate otherwise. Specially for deos, you need that kinda pressure to apply them properly, what'll be the justification to use this mechanism for toothpaste? Also, you'll either have to change the density of the toothpaste or the inner mechanism of the can.
Same in the case of those dispenser like bottles. Would it work with the current density of toothpaste? Why don't you try it out and see? Also, don't you think it'll lead to a lot of wastage?
Not saying that you should discard these ideas but maybe you need more indepth study.
Thanks for the comment. Yeah, I understand what you're saying about the colors etc. Wll work on it. :)
yeah u are rite, it will lead to a wastage(thats important). i think i should take a walk in to any supermarkets to find out more. thanks aastha, im enjoying this bloody challenge now.
aastha i went to some supermarkets and looked for some products, if i could substitutes to tube. i think the only option liked was that of handwashes. probably il sketch and post it so that u have a better idea. about wastage every product goes through some kind of wastage. now that u have changesd my mind i don wanna do tubes.
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